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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • "In preparation of Hermine, multiple tropical cyclone warnings and watches were issued in the Southeastern United States, while state of emergencies were declared in Florida, Georgia, North Carolina, Virginia, Maryland, and New Jersey." link "state of emergencies" to state of emergency. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Similar coastal and freshwater flooding occurred in Pasco County, where 7 homes were destroyed, 305 sustained major damage, and 1,564 received minor damage. " spell out 7 since it is less than 10. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • It appears to have been a reduction of wind shear
  • " In Batabanó on Cuba's southern coast, the southerly winds and 8.5 in (215 mm) of rainfall caused moderate flooding.[50]" this sentence implies the southerly winds cause the rain. I don't think this was the case. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Throughout the county, approximately 75 homes or businesses were inflicted major damage, while 60 had minor impact.[59] " weird use of passive voice. Maybe change trhe "had" to "suffered" or "sustained". YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Tropical Storm Hermine Advisory Archive" to "Hurricane Hermine Advisory Archive".

All in all, well written and researched, just a few minor errors here and there. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:02, 28 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]